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the sound of clanking metal
on the roof of your mouth
as your tongue touches behind your teeth,
you are an underdramatic electric being.

formulated responses
                "i'm sorry
                                i can't help you with that"

an inhuman, a mirage of sorts-
so unbelieveably cold.
i can't help but wonder if, under your skin...
is there really blood?
Metal touches fire, metal burns
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moonlit-daydream's avatar
That is the most creative way I've ever known someone to call another a robot.
I've had people describe me as a robot.
I would have been thoroughly impressed had they come up with something
a fraction as creative as "you are an underdramatic electric being."

Splendid.